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Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Really well done. I especially like this line β€œAnd the world still spins

as we face tired, old regressions,

we return to our aggressions,

shouting, shaking, shivering

in this cold snow globe alone.”

David C. Roberson's avatar

Thanks! Haha that’s my least favorite part! I almost cut it! That just goes to show you never know what will hit with someone!

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

100% you just never know! It feels very raw but also so true of the human experience. Always returning.

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Wow 🀯 amazing! Glad you posted! 🫢

David C. Roberson's avatar

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!