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Thorn's avatar

I feel the same. ๐Ÿ’” Very nicely written. I really love how you start out one way and then at the end it changes, in this poem and your other poems. A mutating refrain. So beautiful and lends almost an eerie quality. ๐ŸŒŸ

David C. Roberson's avatar

Thank you! I'm glad my work means something for you and connects! I don't mutate my refrains often. ๐Ÿ˜