And I love them. I always feel like there’s a knife twist in the chest. And I will reread and pick up more of the little lines you tie in so discreetly.
This is beautifully written. You ever thought about commissioning this into a song? It's got a lot of good hit points for a blues tune. That kinda heart-wailing rhythm
Thanks, Bryan. I haven't thought of commissioning it into a song, but almost all of my poetry was written with music in my head. I hear tunes for them, I just can't play anything or read music.
I’m too stupid for your poèmes.
No you're not!
And I love them. I always feel like there’s a knife twist in the chest. And I will reread and pick up more of the little lines you tie in so discreetly.
I am ready for the 700 word poem.
It's up and ready for you! ALSO thank you for loving them and being so kind!
Really hope piece
Wow this is sooo good. So beautiful! 😍
Coming from you, that means a lot! Thank you!
My goodness you flatter me. Thank you as well! 🫶
This is beautifully written. You ever thought about commissioning this into a song? It's got a lot of good hit points for a blues tune. That kinda heart-wailing rhythm
Thanks, Bryan. I haven't thought of commissioning it into a song, but almost all of my poetry was written with music in my head. I hear tunes for them, I just can't play anything or read music.
Beautifully written, wow! So sad, it brought me to tears. I can feel this whole poem. Thank you, I love it! (Even though it makes me cry).💚
Thank you for being so nice! I’m glad it resonated with you!