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Holly's avatar

I enjoyed this truly, the rhyme scheme was brilliantly satisfying

David C. Roberson's avatar

Ooh, thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! I always worry about the rhyme schemes! šŸ˜„

Thorn's avatar

This is so sad, with a glimmer of hope; sometimes that's all one has. Nicely written! It gives a lot of feeling. Thank you!