Written Sometime in 2005
The fall from dreamland. Felt that. Beautiful poem David. The pace of it clicked on every level
This is beautifuy written. The feeling of the new love, then the person being different and changing, love turning to past tense. Powerfully honest and true. 🌟 Thank you!
Loved this David. Knowing, this is a beautiful artifact, and it holds the nuance really well.
Though I loved draft #1, and it had to exist for this you to write the one people need to feel.
Gorgeous.
The shift from love to loved. Made more painful in its subtlety.
Love poems hit differently. 💕
The fall from dreamland. Felt that. Beautiful poem David. The pace of it clicked on every level
This is beautifuy written. The feeling of the new love, then the person being different and changing, love turning to past tense. Powerfully honest and true. 🌟 Thank you!
Loved this David. Knowing, this is a beautiful artifact, and it holds the nuance really well.
Though I loved draft #1, and it had to exist for this you to write the one people need to feel.
Gorgeous.
The shift from love to loved. Made more painful in its subtlety.
Love poems hit differently. 💕