Crosshatched
A Poem Written 07/01/2006
Crosshatched 07/01/2006 David C. Roberson
Rise up with caution in your longing. The static through radio whispers, its voices breathing some strange, sad message in your ear, calling you ever closer, ever closer. Listen hard to their yearnings; ensconce yourself in The Darkness, foreboding, inviting, enticing. Allow your inner self the privilege passed down through generations, the birthright of all ages: the ability to decipher the language of The Dead Things lurking in the dark, those black beings heaving sour nothings through bathroom tile teeth, white and peeking out from a stretched and greasy smile. Rise up to find the breaking dawn diminishing the demeanor of the dark night. Survey your cell, so sealed it makes cemented cubicles look like open fields, green and alive under blissful, blue skies. You'll find quickly that the sun has sent The Darkness into hiding, back to the cavernous confines of its dank, dirty dwelling, absorbing the deeds that define us, the timestamps so trying they keep us from smiling. Rise up! Find The Darkness approaching from the blood in your veins: ink pouring from pen, obsidian glistening upon white paper, spreading stains like your soul sullied by years of the ink, the bile and the bruisings, the deaths, and the stink, The Itch of the old inspirations, so dark in their infinity, so cold in their indifference, so quick with temerity, to seep out of every pore, forming the lines that weren't there years before. The lines on your body and face, the lines mostly blamed upon gravity and age. But each mark is a scar from the merging of our souls with the rampant and sin-induced splurging of time and life's evident splashings. The liars and leapers and lepers and thrashings, the hatred and rapings and roundabout stashings, all culminate as your shell begins cracking, finally to form a glorious crosshatching.




Oooh, I like this a lot. One of my favorite types of poetry is gothic, and this feels very gothic in the best ways. The rhythm and ending was beautifully done too. :)
I can see why it’s a favourite, excellent final line payoff