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Kayla Michelle Miller's avatar

Oooh, I like this a lot. One of my favorite types of poetry is gothic, and this feels very gothic in the best ways. The rhythm and ending was beautifully done too. :)

David C. Roberson's avatar

Thank you so much, Kayla! I'm so glad you liked it!

The Other Girls's avatar

I can see why it’s a favourite, excellent final line payoff

David C. Roberson's avatar

Thank you so much!